Thursday, June 24

Poem - Naive Attempt

I tried editing, re-alligning and adding few words to the poem from "Before Sunrise".. Or in other words .. "Inspired" by Before SunRise :P
Oh Dear..
Do I know you?

You are my delusion angel
In a fantasy parade
In life's dark tunnel
In Deluding vibrant colors

I want to know what you think
I dont want to guess anymore

I know where I came from
Do you have an idea where I am going?

Oh Dear..
You are my delusion angel .. my Future..
Be as pretty as you seem to be

3 comments:

  1. Simply beautiful. I have no more words.
    B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L.

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  2. Way to go, Preethe !

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  3. its simple and a lovely read:)

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